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Friday, September 2, 2011

Vows of the future

They stand facing the wind,
Everyone watches them.
They stand together,
Neither complete without the other.


The tall twenty-five year old whispers something into her ear,
She laughs and pulls his arms around her.
They stand in the second-floor balcony,
They watch the sunset together.


The girl is a doctor,
She works ardently at her hospital,
She changes someone's life everyday,
She will be a good mother.


The boy is an engineer and a pillar of society,
He works to change and improve life,
He helps keep the neighborhood safe,
He will be a good father.


Their love gives everyone else hope for the future,
The two hard workers help the society.
Everyone watches them with pride,
They let no one stare with envy.


The girl leans against him,
He smiles as she relaxes.
They wait to welcome their first-born,
The street waits with bated breath.


They are two diamonds in a sea of rubies,
Both made for one another.


I didn't want to write the stanza about the boy, but it seemed incomplete without it. I tried to be modest, okay?

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24 comments:

  1. the butterfly effectSeptember 2, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    and its not hard to figure out to what this post relates..

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  2. Rishika SharmaSeptember 2, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    lucky you..

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  3. Mehr AhmedSeptember 2, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    T'Awwwww! I love it. :D
    The girl you're in love with is INDEED lucky! :)

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  4. The girl of the sunSeptember 2, 2011 at 3:55 PM

    Pictures are great, as always. True words..

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  5. ateeq mughalSeptember 2, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    They are two diamonds in a sea of rubies,
    Both made for one another.
    this was the touchiest part up there,
    well, well i can sense the strong love between you and her,
    its so strong,
    gos keeps it strong

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  6. Just another girl.September 2, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    i hope it stays this strong, forever. :)

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  7. Rooj SiddiquiSeptember 2, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    D'awwww <3
    I loved each word! Your love is indeed very strong. Best of luck both of you :)

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  8. Kiran AshrafSeptember 2, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    the girl is lucky to have you :) hard to find boys like you...wishing u both good luck :)

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  9. Kashaf A.September 3, 2011 at 2:10 AM

    Reminds me of him :D

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  10. cricketfreakSeptember 3, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    So adorable :) And the one who leaves you breathless commented too!

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  11. ...September 3, 2011 at 2:31 AM

    I'll agree with Mehr. She's one lucky girl =) Hope everything goes well =)

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  12. AngeliqueSeptember 3, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    Aww this is so cute :) <3

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  13. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]September 3, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    hahaa awww...sooo sooo sooo cute...literally that was a adorable post...!:) awwhh completly went gaga over it:)
    congratulations...and mashaa Allah:)

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  14. monamourSeptember 3, 2011 at 8:22 AM

    awwwwwwwww! how cute!

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  15. aakashSeptember 3, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    me love the comic strip at the end :D

    aJ

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  16. MAHNOORSeptember 3, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    OMG. beautiful indeed =)

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  17. Miss HSeptember 3, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    I love it when guys aren't afraid to voice their feelings! She's one lucky girl :)

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  18. Curl JungSeptember 3, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Inspirational post.

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  19. IfraSeptember 3, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    lovely! <3

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  20. Shagun OhriSeptember 3, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    I'm gonna agree with Hazel. :)
    This is really beautiful.♥

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  21. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 3:30 AM

    is this about you? or fiction?
    and well....weddings :D

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  22. OvaisSeptember 4, 2011 at 7:58 AM

    Thank you everyone! =D

    Chintan; It's.. the future as we visualize it. :)

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  23. Komal September 4, 2011 at 1:24 PM

    Hahaha. :D
    It was a good one.
    Well love makes one a poet. :p

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  24. PhilO♥September 5, 2011 at 1:28 AM

    Oh My God :) This is so sweet :)
    I smiled all the way while reading it :) It's lovely.
    You really have done a hell lot of planning :P

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