You say you'll be fine,
But you're upset right now.
You say it'll be alright,
But it's not alright now.
When something happens,
It affects you the most.
When someone goes to the hospital,
It hits you the hardest.
You try not to show it,
You try to keep it all inside you,
But you need an outlet,
And that's why I'm here for you.
You just want to help and heal, I know,
You want to remove the family's pain and torture,
You want them all happy together,
And I know that you can make it possible for them.
You can make a difference,
I know you will.
You want to help,
And with time, you will.
You will be the one that others can rely on,
You will be the one whom people look to for support,
And although you may not be ready now,
You will be, and you'll do it naturally.
You're worried about what will happen,
And you try to make things better by yourself,
But remember,
Faith will help you where all else fails.

"But remember,
ReplyDeleteFaith will help you where all else fails."
True. Simply awesome Bro <3
Don't go all emo, Ovais. Write FUN!
ReplyDeleteI just hope she reads it.
Cause i can get the sentiments behind! :)
You know what, I am in a speaking-everything-truly-mood-today.
ReplyDeleteThis made me feel so better. I felt this was written for me.
"You say it'll be alright,
But it's not alright now."
I am rarely impressed, so yeah, you can be proud of yourself today.
:)
ReplyDeleteYou have that distinct style of saying it without all that vocab-diction-drama ...simple, and it hits you.
Fear ends when faith begins... :)
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Dude, seriously, you're so in love xD This such a sweet poem =D
ReplyDeleteure so awesome. totally wicked. and u go with the moods. i love your blog =D ure just unbelievable.
ReplyDeletemake sure the one who leaves YOU breathless reads it.
=)
Aww this is beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteAman; Thank youu =D
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Wait for my next post. It's going to be really funny =D
Hamza Bin Laden; You said that once before too :P
Something about how impressing you was like climbing Everest in shorts. :P
Thank you, waise. :P
Amna; It's easier to relate to then =D
Areesha; Hahahaha. Thank you =)
Mahnoor; Thank you =D She reads it before anyone else =D
Oh, wait, brilliant idea.
TheOneWhoLeavesMeBreathless; I love youuu =D
And surprise! :P
Hazel; =D
Aww I love this. *Awesome* You need to write more of these :D
ReplyDeleteawf man this is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteindeed it will..
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ReplyDeletehey
ReplyDeleteyou know i read this poem and while commenting i thought i will specifically make a refernce to on eof your lines
but i did not
..??
and you know why??
cozz each so line so freaking good..!
it is so meaningful so emotional..!
so keep writing but do start enjoying..!
tc
dasvadaniya
suvaiba..!
amazing. :)
ReplyDeletethats really sweet, great job! thanks for the comment!
ReplyDeleteJuliet
wow its beautiful i loved it really! fantastic
ReplyDeleteoptimism and positivity are always worth sharing.. nice read :)
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Man, this is beautiful!! :D
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Suvaiba Fatima Ahmed; =D